Sunday, September 12, 2010

Poetry, everyone!

I wrote this poem a few months ago for my girlfriend, whom I consider much more that that flimsy title.  I was getting rather tired of being away from her and only being able 1 day a week of seeing her, so I drafted this poem.  I hope you enjoy it.

My love for her cannot be expressed
There are not enough roses in the world,
That I can present to her which leaves me depressed,
All they will do is become withered and old

My love burns for her hotter than stars in the sky
I look to the moon,
Resting up so high
And I think of her, how we will be together soon

It fills the lake with a silver glow of light
Portraying her brown hair as ripples in the river
Her marvelous smile and soft face shine bright
Her determination will leave you to quiver

She has gone through many changes and much pain
But yet she still stands strong
I want to help her stay dry, out of the rain
Anyone who says I can't is completely wrong.

Her beauty should not be measured simply on the outside
But it should be on the inside to
But even then i will confide
Her beauty surpasses anyone known to you

She is like a rose
Such elegant flow of personality on her pedals
But grab her thorns and remorse will be what flows
Through you, however, you notice she is more beautiful than angels

If she were put in a field of flowers
She would shine out with the radiance
Of a rainbows prodigious colors
None of the other roses beauty has a chance

As she laughs, I laugh
And as she cries, I cry
From our love we quaff,
I only hope that our time together will never die

As she stands in the middle of the lake,
Glowing off of the silver moonlight
Her beauty can not be fake
It is her, the one i fell in love with that one night

She is my love
And no one can ever take her place
I will love her forever after death and above
No one can match her beauty no one can match her grace

I wish to be with her forever
They're keeping us apart, keeping her from me.
I hope soon we will be together
Finally with you in my arms, Ebonie.


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  2. Wow what a lovely read.

  3. Nice poem i can relate, i usually only get to see my girlfriend 1 day a week too
    Well see comes over on saturday usually and spends the night and all of sunday with me but it's still only 1 get together a week. We're tight though so it's ok. :D

  4. Awwws. Classic poetry. Showing support for my blogging comrades.

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  6. Hey Great Post Man! Just Passing By Your Blog To Show Some Support Take Care !

  7. That was quite pleasant. Reminded me of Christopher Marlowe actually. But yes, I like your blog posts way too much, so I've decided to follow you. :D

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  8. Showing my nightly support, comrade.

  9. Showing some support for a followed blog, brother.

  10. deep and touching! check out my blog for poems too!

  11. aww, almost makes me miss my ex lol