My love for her cannot be expressed
There are not enough roses in the world,
That I can present to her which leaves me depressed,
All they will do is become withered and old
My love burns for her hotter than stars in the sky
I look to the moon,
Resting up so high
And I think of her, how we will be together soon
It fills the lake with a silver glow of light
Portraying her brown hair as ripples in the river
Her marvelous smile and soft face shine bright
Her determination will leave you to quiver
She has gone through many changes and much pain
But yet she still stands strong
I want to help her stay dry, out of the rain
Anyone who says I can't is completely wrong.
Her beauty should not be measured simply on the outside
But it should be on the inside to
But even then i will confide
Her beauty surpasses anyone known to you
She is like a rose
Such elegant flow of personality on her pedals
But grab her thorns and remorse will be what flows
Through you, however, you notice she is more beautiful than angels
If she were put in a field of flowers
She would shine out with the radiance
Of a rainbows prodigious colors
None of the other roses beauty has a chance
As she laughs, I laugh
And as she cries, I cry
From our love we quaff,
I only hope that our time together will never die
As she stands in the middle of the lake,
Glowing off of the silver moonlight
Her beauty can not be fake
It is her, the one i fell in love with that one night
She is my love
And no one can ever take her place
I will love her forever after death and above
No one can match her beauty no one can match her grace
I wish to be with her forever
They're keeping us apart, keeping her from me.
I hope soon we will be together
Finally with you in my arms, Ebonie.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Poetry, everyone!
I wrote this poem a few months ago for my girlfriend, whom I consider much more that that flimsy title. I was getting rather tired of being away from her and only being able 1 day a week of seeing her, so I drafted this poem. I hope you enjoy it.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
aww good poem :)
ReplyDeleteWow what a lovely read.
ReplyDeletehttp://akab-is-lazy.blogspot.com/
Yay! An update!
ReplyDeletecool poetry
ReplyDeleteNice poem i can relate, i usually only get to see my girlfriend 1 day a week too
ReplyDeleteWell see comes over on saturday usually and spends the night and all of sunday with me but it's still only 1 get together a week. We're tight though so it's ok. :D
I like it. Write more.
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteAw that's so sweet of you. :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
ReplyDeleteAwwws. Classic poetry. Showing support for my blogging comrades.
ReplyDeleteHey Great Post Man! Just Passing By Your Blog To Show Some Support Take Care !
ReplyDeleteThat was quite pleasant. Reminded me of Christopher Marlowe actually. But yes, I like your blog posts way too much, so I've decided to follow you. :D
ReplyDeleteI have a blog as well, which you can follow if you're interested. It's the life story of a badass, modern Pecos-Bill-type character told in near-daily vignettes. I'm looking for actual readers, rather than just clickers/supporters, so if anyone's interested, feel free to take a look. =)
http://tornadojackson.blogspot.com/
nice poem, bro.
ReplyDeleteShowing my nightly support, comrade.
ReplyDeletenice man...snap snap snap snap
ReplyDeleteSoothes the soul man.
ReplyDeleteShowing some support for a followed blog, brother.
ReplyDeletegreat poem
ReplyDeleteahhhh, so sweet
ReplyDeletefinally back :D
ReplyDeletedeep and touching! check out my blog for poems too!
ReplyDeletehuge props for effort
ReplyDeleteaww, almost makes me miss my ex lol
ReplyDelete